Sheep Point of View

I saw a lady walking by my baby.  I thought, “Who is this lady? Is she trying to steal my baby?”  I decided to run and save my baby. When I got close to the lady, she looked scared.  I decided not to attack her, and to protect my baby.

points of view dictation

The mother sheep followed me along the path, picking up her pace as she realised I was within touching distance of her lamb.  She let out a loud low bleat which echoed across the paddock. The sleeping lamb lifted it’s head and turned toward us, before slowly returning to it’s sleep.  As the sheep got closer and closer, I thought about whether I should turn and run. I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards its lamb. “Phew, that was a close call.”

Swimming across the pool

Movie Narrative

WALT write our ideas in an order which makes sense.
WALT turn a narrative text into a movie storyboard.

I worked with Mrs T.A. to do my writing. She helped me put speech marks into my writing.

Once upon a time there were 4 soldiers walking in the mountains. Their names were Austin, Tipi, John and Sione. They were looking for the criminal that had killed the boss. The criminal had escaped after they caught him the first time and now they were trying to look for him again.

They saw a poor man standing in the shop, he was selling some food. So the soldiers went up to the poor man and asked, “Can we have some food, we are hungry.” The poor man said “Yes, here is some food.” They started walking again and then it started to rain and thunder and lightning. The poor man said to them, “Come back. You can stay at the shops”. Then the poor man said “Stay here until the rain and storm has finished.” Austin saw the criminal walking passed and then the poor man told them to dress up like someone else. Then the criminal came and asked for some food. Then Austin and Tipi went through the back door, then they went up and caught the criminal and they took him back.

When they were walking back, they saw some more soldiers. Then they had a war. Austin, Tipi, John and Sione won the war. They took the criminal home and he was locked up in prison.

movie narrative

Movie Narrative




WALT write our ideas in an order which makes sense.




WALT turn a narrative text into a movie storyboard.




Planning Slides


Start writing here:onceuponatime there was a superhero and his name was superman and then one night there was a villain going to Town and then the police, was Trying to stop the villain from running away with the muny and then superman come to save the day and he was flying after the villain and the villain got to his car and he torn the car on and he was Driving away from superman and then superman was flying fast and he got up to the car and then he stop the car from Driving away from him and then the villain got out of the car and superman ask the villain way a you doing this and then the villain said way do you need to no and they had a fight and the villain lost and then superman went to give the many back to the police and the police was happy at super man and that how you save the day do you now miss moala and miss west one day you to were be a superhero.

Peep hole Narrative Writing Plan

narrative writing plan

Narrative Writing Plan