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Wednesday 22 August 2018

Movie Narrative

WALT write our ideas in an order which makes sense.
WALT turn a narrative text into a movie storyboard.

I worked with Mrs T.A. to do my writing. She helped me put speech marks into my writing.

Once upon a time there were 4 soldiers walking in the mountains. Their names were Austin, Tipi, John and Sione. They were looking for the criminal that had killed the boss. The criminal had escaped after they caught him the first time and now they were trying to look for him again.

They saw a poor man standing in the shop, he was selling some food. So the soldiers went up to the poor man and asked, “Can we have some food, we are hungry.” The poor man said “Yes, here is some food.” They started walking again and then it started to rain and thunder and lightning. The poor man said to them, “Come back. You can stay at the shops”. Then the poor man said “Stay here until the rain and storm has finished.” Austin saw the criminal walking passed and then the poor man told them to dress up like someone else. Then the criminal came and asked for some food. Then Austin and Tipi went through the back door, then they went up and caught the criminal and they took him back.

When they were walking back, they saw some more soldiers. Then they had a war. Austin, Tipi, John and Sione won the war. They took the criminal home and he was locked up in prison.

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